The best holidays I´ve ever have
The best vacation I´ve had in my life was my trip to Zapallar. The first reason that makes this trip the best of my life, is because it was a holidays with my sisters and my friends, and always had so much fun. Secondly, I fell in love with this trip so wonderful landscapes that exist there. My friend María José has his family in Zapallar, so we always had the beauty of its beaches, hills, houses, etc. I never visited this area, so I found the place much more beautiful than it described my friend. The last reason that makes this the best trip is the tranquility and hospitality of the local people, which makes the holidays more pleasant.
Certainly were some beautiful moments with my friends, parties, hiking, swimming in the beach, sun and good company. The best of all is that back this summer, will be a great trip.
In the car on the way to Zapallar.
in the second line you could change "holidaty" to "holiday"... great pictures!!! regards.
ResponderBorrarHi my dear lichita!. Your vacations sounds really fun!!
ResponderBorrarI had one suggestion for you, maybe you can put this "I fell in love with this trip for the wonderful landscapes that exist there" instead of "I fell in love with this trip so wonderful landscapes". because I read it and I didn't understand very well. I do not know if I'm right but it is a suggestion. cheers and love for you <3
Lissette, good text. I would change this sentence: "is because it was a holidaty with my sisters and my friends" by, "is because i was with my sisters and my friends".
ResponderBorrarHugs.
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ResponderBorrarThe best vacation I´ve had in my life was my trip to Zapallar. (TS)
ResponderBorrarThe first reason that makes this trip the best of my life, is because it was a holiday[s] with my sisters and my friends, and always had so much fun. (SS1)
Secondly, I fell in love with [this trip so]SUCH wonderful landscapes that exist there. (SS2)
My friend María José has [his] HER family in Zapallar, so we always had the beauty of its beaches, hills, houses, etc. (EXPLANATION)
I HAD never visited this area, so I found the place much more beautiful than it WAS described BY my friend. (SS3)
The last reason that makes this the best trip is the tranquility and hospitality of the local people, which makes the holiday[s] more pleasant.(SS3)
Certainly THEY were some beautiful moments with my friends, parties, hiking, swimming in the beach, sun and good company. The best of all is that WE ARE GOING back this summer, IT will be a great trip.(CONCLUDING SENTENCE)
Lissette,
ResponderBorrarGood writing, just pay attention to your edition work, some silly mistakes you could have avoided. Your structure is OK, but you need some explanations-examples-comments to complement your supporting sentences.
Cheers,