My last vacations
Hi geofriends! Today i'm going talk about my last vacations.
This year my vacations were very special, because that I was with my family. Our vacations began to arrive in Viña del Mar, Where we stayed in the home of a dear friend of my family, Emilio.
Our trip began leaving the terminal of Viña, because depiste having thea address of the department, ended up irretrievably in the city. When arrived at the department, we realizes that was very pretty and have a excellent panoramic, but is very small of my family (I tell you that thay are 7 people in my family?). That day we arrived very tired so we went not down to the beach, but at the night we celebrate eating a lot pizza and drinking beer.
The next day Emilio invited us to Villa Alemana, a park had picnic area and swimming pool. We were laughing and talking, and we ate a delicious roast. My brother Daniel came out of the pool throughout the day. The rest of holiday, we spent from beach in beach with my family, we went to Con Con, Las Salinas and other beaches I don't remember his name. It was a great vacations!
Hello,
ResponderBorrarI also was in Viña del mar, touring the city, people in very nice I found myself, good greetings
lichita <3 <3 Viña del mar is a good place for visiting and to spend your vacations, it's a historical and beautiful places... Cheers S. =)
ResponderBorrarLisette,
ResponderBorrarWC: 202. Excellent. Please, always write subject pronoun “I” like this, CAPITAL “I”. I am happy you could enjoy a vacation with your family. You need to make a bigger effort to edit your text, though. Please check the following:
Pay attention to the spelling of some words: depiste, thea, thay
… Today i'm going TO talk about my last vacations.
Our vacations began to arrive??? in Viña del Mar
… …having address of the (de)Apartment,
… the (de)Apartment, we realizeDs that was very pretty and HAD aN excellent panoramic VIEW, but WAS TOO SMALL FOR my family (DID I tell you that THERE are 7 people in my family?).
That day we arrived very tired so we DID (went) not down to the beach, but at the night we celebrateD eating a lot pizza and drinking beer.
The next day Emilio invited us to Villa Alemana, a park had A picnic area and swimming pool.
…My brother Daniel DIDN’T COME (came) out of the pool throughout the day
… and other beaches I don't remember (his) THEIR nameS. THEY WERE (It was a) great vacations!
Cheers,